Sometimes..

Monday, May 18, 2009
Hey guys....this is the first time i wrote a poem..don't think its that good but just wanted to share it with you..

Sometimes I wander the streets in search for something
something which is special to my heart
yet when I wanna describe it to someone
it seems I am at a loss of words...

Sometimes I keep on thinking about something
something which occupies my mind all day long
yet when I try to figure it out
it seems like a mystery which cant be solved...

Sometimes my heart wants to cry out loud
cry for something which i have just lost
yet when i wanna set my heart free
it seems like the tears disagree...

Sometimes my soul wants to be freed
freed from the burden life has given it
yet when it tries to break the cage
it seems it has already died,though i m still in rage!

6 comments:

  1. hopped from abhishek's

    and a very good poem...

    just a point to add...the end was ecstatic and beautiful as it was in a rhythm..the intial lines lacked that rhyme....

    but overall very good lines :)

    keep writing

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  2. a very good poem.agey bhi likhti rehna.


    Ankit jain
    (ur true friend)

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  3. i understand how u feeling!! when ur bro is around, people bound to exhibit those mysterious and unfortunate symptoms!!

    jokes apart... ur poem is definitely lovely!

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  4. came from ur bro's page

    and he hasnt commented yet?

    thats sad!!!

    chriz

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  5. nice poem.. and nice blog

    @chriz
    grr

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  6. Lovely words there! And I very well understand those (some)times...
    Have good days! :-)

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