55-Fiction: Autumn of Life

Thursday, April 18, 2013




He looked around, there was nothing but darkness.

He was already late and now he was lost. He was panting but couldn't stop. He couldn't be late, not today.

He saw small gathering at a distance and rushed towards them.  Finally!

He was just in time to see people pouring sand over his own grave.



P.S. First attempt at 55-word fiction story.



3 comments:

  1. A very beautiful first attempt:)

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  2. wow nice words short and meaningful ..good job dear (Y)

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  3. @bushra: Thanks for your appreciation! :)
    @yugal: Thank you! :D

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