Sunday, January 4, 2015
This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 50; the fiftieth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. In association with ​Soulmates: Love without ownership by Vinit K Bansal. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton.

Her eyes met his
and he just knew.
He didn't say a word,
She never had to!

She completed him
in a million ways.
Yet, felt imperfect
without his praise.

He was a warm embrace
on a starry night.
She, a gentle breeze
when the time was right.

She looked at him
a long deep gaze.
He was lost in her,
and their hearts ablaze

They tried and tried
alas! couldn't change their fates.
Even the skies cried
as they parted the soul-mates.

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  1. "A pity that those skies have churned into a storm
    We once were too mesmerized to see.
    Through the evanescent silence I hear fleeting cries
    One from your sorrow and other from my shame..."

    So poignantly written and it stays true to the end...

  2. Very nice post. Loved reading the poem a lot. Thank u so much for the share.

  3. Heart touching words woven into a beautiful poem. :)
    All the best for BAT50. :-)


  4. Loved the rhyme, but sad that they had to part.

  5. You managed to churn out a story in the form of a poem. Also your poem didn't look like a clumsy mishmash of rhyming words, on the contrary it was a smooth narrative.

    Well done.

    All the best for BAT 50 :)

    Do drop by mine


    1. Thanks a lot! Your words inspire me! :)

  6. Thank you so much Isha for participating! I like the way you rhymed, but sad to know they parted.

    Someone is Special

  7. I liked the lines
    She completed him
    in a million ways.
    Yet, felt imperfect
    without his praise.

    Well written !

  8. a nice rhythmic composition

    My Blogaton#50 post Soulmates

  9. Why did they have to part? This part of love I don't like... You brought a love story alive with your words... Isha, I loved it.


  10. I liked the story in a rhyming poem.:)
    good luck!

  11. It always feels magical when we read a lot in few words....
    Well done lady

    " Usne mujhe chaha main aakash hogaya,
    maine usse chaha wo dharti ho gayi,
    or fir hum kabhi na mile chitiz ki tarah "


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